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cp698 Silent Witness Linkety Link! Posts: 0	Super mario galaxy By cp698 (February 10, 2009, 04:28:52 PM)
	What did you think of my review of super mario galaxy. Was it good and what could be improved? No more heroes is my all time favourite game. So far anyway!
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Frozenwounds Demonic Admin No Avatar Silver Demon Games Admin Posts: 37	RE: Super mario galaxy By cp698 (February 11, 2009, 11:25:45 AM)
	It seems that after our comments on your other review, you've improved some of the spelling and grammar in this one. There is still the odd error but never mind. I'll probably just fix them for you anyway. One more improvement I could suggest is that you could maybe make an "Aim" section or something as the story section was kind of disjointed with the description of gameplay at the beginning. Also even though it's a Mario game, maybe a little negativity? Anyway, good look into what the game's about, keep up the good work. I'll be reading your "Disaster: Day of Crisis" review when I get home! Another nice review. Silver Demon Games is looking for affiliates! PM me!
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