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cp698
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Guitar hero world tour By cp698 (February 5, 2009, 07:17:07 PM) |
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What do you think of my review? Is it good? What can be improved if i do another one.
No more heroes is my all time favourite game.
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Frozenwounds
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RE: Guitar hero world tour By cp698 (February 6, 2009, 09:55:58 PM) |
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Hey, thanks for posting your review.
Right, opinions.
+ Lots of information
+ Easy to follow
+ Quite well structured
+ Decent picture and you did the short story thing right
- Bit of lack of punctuation.!',? 
- Some sentences go on a bit long so they could do with chunking up
- An introduction basically describing the game would be nice
- You could have explained what the "Mii Freestyle" mode actually is
Also, I'd reccomend you put the picture in your short story section instead of the avatar, as it makes the reviews page look nicer and it shows up on your full story anyway.
It looks best when you put your short story comment underneath the picture.
Anyway you've posted a couple of nice reviews so thanks and I hope my advice is helpful!
If you need anything else just post here or PM me or Krikenking.
Thanks,
Frozenwounds.
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KrikenKing
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RE: Guitar hero world tour By cp698 (February 7, 2009, 07:31:43 PM) |
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Signing off with your alias Frozenwounds? We can see your name above "Where your avatar should be".
Anyway, yeah the review wasn't bad but the grammar could do with alot of work.
Before you post your review, you should use the grammar check on Microsoft Word by pressing F7 and it will fix most of your mistakes properly.
But the review was in-depth and straight to the point. Keep working at it and you'll make a really great review in future.
Peace out.
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